sirDark's Reviews

[Tarboy]

Movie of The Year!

Gratz!

[War, Snow and Fire]

Great story!

Awesome animation. Cute style. Movie-like but a little cliche story. The only bad thing was that the snow shoved the framerate up my pc-s ass.

[CD08 Frankenberry]

Unfair

That is so unfair that just beacuse your renaenae you get a higher score. Ive never got more than or even a 4 but you get it with just a silly loop. Im not saying that your bad but its just that you get unfair scoring.

ReNaeNae responds:

...you obviously know nothing about Clock Day *sad*

[Seed of Destruction]

Sweet!

Awesome game! Cheers Florian and Grey!

[AVGM]

fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffuck!

goddamn boy! good thing i used autocliker ^^

[Orchestrated Death]

wicked!

its awesome how you came up with this. But i strongly recommend making this a series! Keep it up:P

[To Be Continued]

Kickass!

You sir have forced me to write a music review!

[The Flower]

Very stylish

It looks great. I love the sketchy yet tight style you have going on there. I also like how you use that sketchiness to make the body of the robot(or whatever) more busy than it actually is. It creates fake details witch looks good in here. The piece looks good as concept art but I can imagine that this picture would look a lot cooler if you would add some kind of background if even a vague one. Unfortunately it also looks a little bit too flat. Kind of like a cardboard figure. I suggest you play a bit more with shadows while colouring and rely less on the shadowing of the black lines. Right now it does not give me the feeling that it should be 3-dimensional although I understand that with your cartoony style its a bit harder to accomplish but I have looked at your other works and I can see that you can do it. Hope this helps.

JWBalsley responds:

Thanks a lot for your very detailed response, I'm glad you had some good to things to say about it as well as some solid constructive criticism. The importance of black and shadows can be very significant.

Cheers!

[Marceline]

Great concept, but falls flat.

I can see the potential in this piece that has been unused. Its a shame really. You could improve by giving her sharper outlines so as to flesh out the character more and make it pop out. The colouring also leaves to be desired as the colours are a bit flat. I suggest using sharper contrasts and overall tightening up the drawing. Right now it leaves a bit of an unfinished and rushed work. Just a bit more time and effort and it would look great. Its just a bit too sketchy. Those are some of the ways you can make it look better.

[Lucky day]

Stylish

Very well stylised and I see that this is your way of drawing but I would like to offer some places to improve. The lack of any background makes it look like a sketch and not living up to the potential. Adding some backdrop would have made the piece feel more like a whole and less like somekind of concept art. Maybe that was your intention and I am wanting too much from you but when I look at this picture I see so much potential that has gone unused. You can make some amazingly stylized art if you put just a bit more time in your works. Anyway just my opinion.